Today we are going to write the FINAL SECTION to your story!
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At a signal, the others ran towards it,
yelling and throwing their
spears. Om and I
didn’t have spears, but we yelled anyway. It was
so exciting! A spear caught the reindeer in
its side, and it fell to the
ground. I shouted at Om to run and turned to face
the bear with my
spear. I felt very small. Suddenly the ground gave way… and I found
myself falling down, down, down.
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At a signal, the blue creatures hurtled towards it, yelling and casting
their nets. Chaz
and the old man didn’t have nets,
but were yelling
at the giant anyway. The old man hadn’t felt so alive in years!
Even though the net
wasn’t big enough, the
yelling startled the giant
and it started to run towards them! The old
man shouted at Chaz
to get out of the way, then started to run towards the giant
screaming and waving his
fists! He felt very brave.
Suddenly the
ground gave way … and he found himself falling down, down
down…
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Instead I found I was back home. When I
told my family what
had
happened, they didn’t believe me. They said I’d only been gone a few
hours
and I must have fallen asleep and dreamt it.
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Now, the old man found himself back in his sweet shop. When
he
told his customers what had happened, they didn’t believe him. They
said he
had only been gone for a few hours and he must have
fallen to sleep and dreamt
it.
Years passed but I never forgot my friend Om. I am an archaeologist
now (that’s
me in the glasses.) Everywhere I go, I look in the past
for signs of Om. And I
never stop learning from her people.
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Weeks
passed but the old man never forgot his friend Chaz. He
invented a new type of fudge that was loved by
adults and children
alike. People travelled across the country to try the
delicious fudge
and the old man was finally surrounded by friends.
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