Thursday, 9 July 2020

English - Final section



Today we are going to write the FINAL SECTION to your story!

Good Luck!
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At a signal, the others ran towards it, yelling and throwing their 

spearsOm and I didn’t have spears, but we yelled anyway. It was 

so exciting! A spear caught the reindeer in its side, and it fell to the 

ground. I shouted at Om to run and turned to face the bear with my 

spear. I felt very small. Suddenly the ground gave way… and I found 

myself falling down, down, down.
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At a signal, the blue creatures hurtled towards it, yelling and casting 

their nets. Chaz and the old man didn’t have nets, but were yelling 

at the giant anyway. The old man hadn’t felt so alive in years! 

Even though the net wasn’t big enough, the yelling startled the giant 

and it started to run towards them! The old man shouted at Chaz 

to get out of the way, then started to run towards the giant 

screaming and waving his fists! He felt very brave. Suddenly the 

ground gave way … and he found himself falling down, down 

down… 

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Instead I found I was back home. When I told my family what had 

happened, they didn’t believe me. They said I’d only been gone a few 

hours and I must have fallen asleep and dreamt it.

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Now, the old man found himself back in his sweet shop. When he 

told his customers what had happened, they didn’t believe him. They 

said he had only been gone for a few hours and he must have 

fallen to sleep and dreamt it.

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Years passed but I never forgot my friend Om. I am an archaeologist 

now (that’s me in the glasses.) Everywhere I go, I look in the past 

for signs of Om. And I never stop learning from her people.

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Weeks passed but the old man never forgot his friend Chaz. He 

invented a new type of fudge that was loved by adults and children 

alike. People travelled across the country to try the delicious fudge 

and the old man was finally surrounded by friends.

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