Today, you are going to use the
original text 'A Stone Age Boy' to write your own adventure story using your
planning.
It
is helpful to do this on a computer, but you can write it too. All you need to
do is read the original story out loud then changed little bits at a time.
FOR
EXAMPLE: BLACK - original story. GREEN - Miss Robinson's new story
The parts highlighted in yellow are the parts that I have changed.
STONE AGE BOY
THE SWEET SHOP GRANDPA
An amazing thing once happened to
me. I was wandering in the
woods when I tripped and found
myself falling down, down, down.
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An incredible thing once happened to an old,
grumpy, sweet shop
owner. He was working late in his ancient, desolate sweet
shop one
night when suddenly he was sucked into a jar of peppermint swirls
and found
himself spinning round, round, round!
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When I woke up, I was in a cold,
dark place. I could see daylight in
the distance and I stumbled towards it. Outside,
everything was
different. I realised I was lost. Completely lost. So I walked
and
walked and walked…
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When his eyes finally opened, he was in a
bright, colourful world.
He could see pink, candyfloss-like clouds in the
distance and so he
rose, and limped towards them. Before him, everything was
strange
and different. He realised that we was lost. Completely lost. So he
walked and stumbled and shuffled through this new world…
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Just work on these two opening paragraphs today! I can't wait to read them 😃
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